100 WC- Week 6

It was May 28, 1992, an important day. A 15 year old named Ava was walking to the store and saw a body upside down in a pond. Ava says she was amazed yet terrified. The young lady called the cops to inform them about the dead body. The cops asked Ava, the 15 year old the exact location, what time she saw the body, and if she saw anything strange around the pond. The next day, the news AJA went to her house and interview her about the body. Ava stated to everyone she was overwhelm by questions to leave her alone please.https://100wc.net

One comment

  1. betahildebrand · October 21, 2017 at 11:35 am ·

    Ava has a right to be overwhelmed! You need to work on your verb tenses. Some verbs are in present tense and others are in past tenses. Remember to be consistent.